Chapter 11: Page 12

posted 8th Feb 2021, 11:09 PM

Chapter 11: Page 12
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8th Feb 2021, 11:09 PM

zerothe3rd

Kyoni gets to fish! The reel, since it is a one handed model has 4 buttons. One toggles the bail's open or shut position (r), one locks or loosens the reel's position (L). The other two are how fast the reel returns line to the spool. She's having fun. It's kind of a call back to Chapter 8, page 10 when Kyoni talks about how drowning feels.

Edit: Fixed some oddities in the sky on panel 1. Also fixed the title hilariously claiming to be chapter 12.

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9th Feb 2021, 5:39 AM

Delta-v

That's a handy talent, Lilith, but....it's usually considered a good idea to gut the fish before you cook it. ^^

Seriously, though, @Zero:, you obviously know your way around a fishing pole. :)

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9th Feb 2021, 6:12 PM

zerothe3rd

Hahaha, yeah I wanted to show the fish getting gutted but I ended up ignoring it for panel count. Maybe I should have drawn some goop on the knife to show it was used. Lilith used this trick to make ramen back in Chapter 8 too!

Thanks! When this whole lockdown stuff is done fishing would be fun to get back into.

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9th Feb 2021, 12:17 PM

Thozmp

... Blue haired protagonist, who seems to be continually reincarnating, with unusual parentage, likes fishing, and has a mage friend. ...Alternate!Ryu?(Breath of Fire series)

Also, what is it Lilith forgot she did in panel 5?

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9th Feb 2021, 6:10 PM

zerothe3rd

Wow she is pretty similar to Ryu! Now Kyoni needs a sword and the ability to turn into a dragon! Or, Ryu needs to learn how to snipe!

What Lilith forgot? It is more like something is there that shouldn't be. Luckily in the next several pages it should be somewhat clear.

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