Chapter 10: Page 9

posted 11th May 2020, 11:56 PM

Chapter 10: Page 9
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11th May 2020, 11:56 PM

zerothe3rd

Hopefully that looks close enough like Ice. I think it does but there are so many ways to illustrate it.

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12th May 2020, 4:00 AM

Delta-v

I think the ice effects are close enough. Anything more elaborate would take WAY too much time to draw, and the dialog makes it very clear what Shiyo cast.

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18th May 2020, 11:28 PM

zerothe3rd

I'm glad it was close enough. maybe as these pages come I'll figure it out at the end.

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12th May 2020, 3:35 PM

Thozmp

It looks a bit watery (water-like?) to me. Ice tends to evoke an image of jaggedness and crystalline structures, at least to me.

Also, Kyoni sounds like a person that has gotten out of a nice warm bed and stepped onto the cold, hard floor of a winter night.

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18th May 2020, 11:28 PM

zerothe3rd

Hmm, Yeah I totally agree with that. It's hard to think of how to draw ice in motion since it doesn't, usually, do that. I took your advice though on the stationary ice in the next page.

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